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Post by Arianwen on Aug 27, 2004 16:52:00 GMT -5
ok what i'm going to do is post my poems on here for all to read, please tell me what you think of them and don't steal my work. i'm sure none of you would ever do this but i had to make sure. some of these poems have ben published others have not, so here you are for your reading enjoyment, Arianwen's Poerty!!!! hope you like them  |
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Post by Arianwen on Aug 27, 2004 16:55:59 GMT -5
[glow=yellow,2,300]
Fading in the dark
Can you help me? Can you see?
Why can’t I be what I want to be?
Never will I leave the dark
The sun is gone the lights gone out
The moon remains and gives some hope
But things fade within the dark
There are so many things within my mind
But what they are I’d rather not say
Never will they find me
In darkness I will stay
My heart and mind are lost
Gone with the fading day
And through it all
Why can’t the world see that within me there
Is a soul that bleeds?
[/glow]
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Post by Arianwen on Aug 27, 2004 16:56:50 GMT -5
[glow=yellow,2,300]
Hope reborn
As I walk in the mist the darkness
Seems to fade and within the sky
I see a star leading the way
Where once in my heart darkness dwelled
Now hope replaces this shadow.
I’ve tasted the deepest sorrow
of any creature but now
I know happiness, so pure
For deep within my heart I truly
Begin to understand that this time
I’m going to find my way back home
and the life I once had.
[/glow]
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Post by Arianwen on Aug 27, 2004 17:02:40 GMT -5
[glow=yellow,2,300]
Winter’s last embrace
I lay alone in the snow,
wishing I knew the way back home.
Used for decades against my will,
I’ve been abused and mistreated.
I can’t remember my life before this
and I often wonder what I have missed.
A solitary wish resides in me, of hope for all eternity.
As the snow continues to fall
my heart begins to grow cold.
All hope leaves me and my soul burns away,
but I lift my head and I am free
For no one will ever again take advantage of me.
[/glow]
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Post by Arianwen on Aug 27, 2004 17:04:05 GMT -5
[glow=yellow,2,300]
Silver Wood
Silver draped about my ears, flowers in my hair
Doves fly high above, green grass about my feet fair.
Heaven must be what I see before my very eyes
Whispered sounds around me, above clear blue skies.
Autumn leaves fall gently about the forest floor
But soon, pure white snow will cover all.
Cool autumn breezes weave throughout the ancient wood
Here my people will stay, until the ending of the world.
[/glow]
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Post by pipsmyman on Sept 4, 2004 1:17:47 GMT -5
WOW! They were so good! Before you said that you had some published already...like how or when did you get them published? Are they in a Book?
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Post by pipsmyman on Sept 4, 2004 1:18:54 GMT -5
WOW! They were so good! Before you said that you had some published already...like how or when did you get them published? Are they in a Book?  |
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Post by Arianwen on Sept 4, 2004 6:18:20 GMT -5
Yeah they are in a book, i went in a comp and they published 'fading in the dark' along with some others in a book . that all happened last year, one day i hope to wirte a book full of my poetry, do you think its a good idea, think i could do it? Well i'm glad you liked them and when i write a new one i'll make sure to post it here for everyone to read |
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Post by pipsmyman on Sept 10, 2004 3:20:34 GMT -5
Yeh that sounds like a really kool idea...and you'll get heaps of money...well maybe not heaps but you'll get quite a bit. ;D
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Post by Arianwen on Sept 10, 2004 4:56:57 GMT -5
[glow=yellow,2,300]
Melancholy
Lost I am, in the dead of the night
In day I still walk blind, with no one to help,
I feel so confused; my heart is broken in two
Friends I had have left my side
In darkness I am, alone and afraid
I dream of the way it was,
And how I wish I could go back
In the dark I always was but not till now
Did I see my pain, the suffering I faced every day.
When I think of it now did I ever have a friend?
Or did I just dream it all up in my head?
I wish I knew, the way it was before I fell deeper into shadows
Or was I always here? Always alone, no one to care
I wish I knew but his hold is too great on me
I can’t leave here, forever I will stay.
[/glow]
ok i really think this one needs work, it doesn't sit right with me but what does everyone else think? let me know, if you have any ideas on how i can fix this one i will take them into Consideration, thanx ;D
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Post by Arianwen on Sept 10, 2004 4:58:25 GMT -5
[glow=yellow,2,300]
Separated
One day I will have to leave this land
And still I will want to hold your hand
But in truth what shall we do?
You would die before I do
We are too different, separated by time
There are just so many things I can’t say
Time was kind to give us this
But what future could you have ever wished?
We must take different paths;
You must go and be the way
You should have stayed, living your life away from me
[/glow]
same with this one too, please any ideas would be great.
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Post by Arianwen on Sept 10, 2004 5:04:20 GMT -5
[glow=yellow,2,300] Memory Pale, soft and cooling green we walk together for entirety Lazy afternoons, peace and quite Angelic music fills my ears and I am taken away My eyes are heavy I wish to sleep I lay in cooling mist so deep I drift away and wish to stay Long white Clouds pale blue skies Heaven must been what I see before my eyes Nothing can keep us apart we are meant to be Darkness does not hold my heart I am free I see you there standing tall and my heart knows your own Entwined are hearts are from now until the end No evil could destroy what we have In dreams we will be together again For as long as I reside in this cold dark cell dreams are all we have. [/glow] i really think this one needs work, i wrote it late at night and i think i was half asleep but i'd like to know what you guys think of it, if you don't mind |
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